Fluttershy is hungry

Hmm i like the setting dark at night with the moon on the sky, illuminating the world. Vision is 3.5 because I don't feel its much going on here.

Originallity is a 4 because i have seen things like this before many times.

Tecnique is a 3.5 for accent color is used to drag attention, if that's not the purpoise of the highly saturated apple, then its bad but if it is to have a second point of intress then its really good. And what does drag it down is that lighting is not consistent looking, wich is really bad you need more practice with shading. It looks like same light source is from many directions on fluttershy, i would work with that.

Impact is a 4.5 because the choice of colors here are just soo magnificent. I have some to learn from this piece when it comes to color. not realistic by any means but it's gorgeous. so 4.5 on impact.

Overall a great job and many people would really struggle to get even this far. Keep on doing art its very enjoyable you're an great artist, and it would be a shame if u suddenly stopped.